Feb 18, 2007

Traffic

An endless whooshing.
Had you been born blind
you would not think of cars
dopplering down the street but
harrumphing wind
in packs, softly tearing the air
in a hurry.
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2 comments:

  1. Blumaa2/18/07, 6:55 PM

    this is a test of the emergency writer's system

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  2. Unknown2/19/07, 1:36 PM

    An endless whooshing.
    Had you been born blind
    you would not think of cars
    dopplering down the street but
    harrumphing wind
    in packs, softly tearing the air
    in a hurry.

    LOVE it. Love the Onomatopoeia words. Love reference of cars in packs. love the impact of cars "tearing the air".
    well done.

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